| Before your write your introduction, you need to do a number of things: | |
| Firstly, decide what the general subject area is — This will help you write your General background information sentence/s |
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| Secondly, decide how the statement in the exam prompt (see below) can best be re-written — This will be part of your Opinion sentence |
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| Thirdly, what reasons will you give to support your opinion — These reasons will be summarised in your Thesis statement sentence |
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| Your task: | |
| 1. | List two reasons to agree and, two reasons to disagree |
| 2. | Write an introduction paragraph (this needs three parts and therefore, at least three sentences) |
| 3. | Write your topic sentence for body paragraph one (your first reason) |
| 4. | Write your topic sentence for body paragraph two (your second reason) |
| 5. | Write a conclusion paragraph (this has three parts, part two should be in the Past Tense) |
It is argued by some people that the best things in life are free and that, money cannot buy happiness.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give two specific reasons with examples to support your opinion.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give two specific reasons with examples to support your opinion.
This is an excellent introduction, well done
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Nowadays, some people that the best things in life are free and money cannot buy happiness.Therefore, I agree with these people. There are many reasons for my opinion, however the first, and most, important reason is to sit, chat speak with my family and friends that the best thing in our life. Secondly, when everyone want happy we will find it with out Money. Also, happiness it is important for everyone. In this essay, I will explain the important reasons.
This is a very good description, well done
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There are many requirements in life, but there is one important thing to most people, and
hisour presence can do what we want it is money. In this essay I will write two reasons about that, I disagree that because the money it very important in our life and money allows you buy things that bring people closer together. Also money allows you the ability to travel, go to sporting and arts events, and experience fine dining. These things lead to positive memories, which influence happiness.This is a very good description, well done
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These days , some people think that the best things in life are free and money cannot buy happiness . Therefore , I strongly agree these people . There are two main reasons in my opinion . However in this essay I will give two reasons . The first reason money is very important in the life people can doing any thing they want for example shopping and travel and than people can feel happiness and secondly by money I can help poor people and make them happy
This is a very good introduction, all three parts are covered
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In general,
Tthere are many things that we do. Some things cost us a lot but, some things do not cost any money and make you very happy. Therefore, I completelya greeagree with the idea of the best things in life are free. There are many reason support my opinion, however, in this essay I will give two. The first reason is the simple things when you do you feel more happy and save your money and secondly, best things make you more healthy and have more vitality.This is a very good (but a bit short) introduction, all three parts are covered
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There are many things we like it in our life, and we call it the best things, and it is different from person to another. However some people think that free is the best thing in their life. I
amcompletely disagree with them, because there are many things are the best, but they are not free for instance, traveling, shopping, eating delicious food and having big house with a Ferrari car.This is a very good introduction, all three parts are covered
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These days, the most important in the life is money. Some people feel happiness when they have money and they can doing anything do they want. Therefore, I completely agree with the point money can buy happiness because I can get anything I want. Also, the meaning of happiness for me are travel, shopping and Buy everything new in the world of technology because I like do that. There are many reasons for my opinion, however, in this essay I will explain
some reasonsthe two key ones.This is a very good introduction, all three parts are covered
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There are many best things in the life some of them are free and other is not free. Many people do not have a lot of money to get what they want. So, I disagree with the people who think the money can not buy the best things and happiness. There are two important reasons for my opinion, the first one is the best things is eating and food it is not free. Second, traveling is best thing but we
shouldhave to spend money to do this.This is an excellent introduction, all three parts are covered
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Money is not everything to be happy. Some people think that money is important in your live. I think this is a bad idea. So I think the true happiness is with family and friends. I agree . In this essay, I will give two reasons to support my opinion. First, some people have a lot of money but they are not happy because they are sick. Second, some people feel happy around big families, sincere friends and maintaining good health, this is true happiness;
becauseit is important to remember that money doesn’t last.This is a very good introduction, all three parts are covered
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Some people think the that money is not important in life to by happy.I agree with this idea.In my essay, I will give
towtwo reasons to support my opinion. First, happiness is thing which are we feeling in the hart we can not buy it, happiness is love the family, country and safe. Second, the people have much money buy the thing do not needed in the life,they are do not feel good directions for the money value,they havewhichespecially if they are not helping the other poorer people.This is a very good introduction, all three parts are covered
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Some people think the money is everything in this life and anther people opposite with this people and say the money cannot buy happiness. Therefore, I completely agree with the point of the best things in life are free. There are many reasons for my opinion, however, in this essay I will give two. The first reason is because when you spend your time with your friends or your family is without money, and secondly the health is very the most important thing in this life and when you are sick your life will not be good even if you have millions of rupees.
This is a very good introduction, all three parts are covered
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Some people think the best things in life are free. In my opinion, I completely agree with the point of view of best things in life are free. There are many reasons for my opinion, however, in this essay I will give two reasons. The first reason is because we can spend time with family, and secondly the working is for free,
because thelife without work would be boring and pointless.This is a very good introduction, all three parts are covered
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Everybody in this live , they think in different way , many of them thinks that money is not all things in the live but other people they thinks in other way . I agree with the point of some people thinks that bast things in the live are free . There are many reasons for my opinion
in comparison, in this essay l will give you two reasons. The first reason is we can spend time with family and wedon’tdo not have to pay money . Secondly the nature can see with out pay money .This is a good introduction, all three parts are covered
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Nowadays, some people think the money is everything and you will be happy but, this is untrue you can be happy without money. Of course I agree with these people the money can not buy happiness and the best things in life no need to buy it. There are two reasons support my opinion if you are sick do not need to buy medicine because it is free and spend your time with your family and friends.
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Nowadays,
thesome people think that best things in life are free. In my opinion, I disagree this idea and I will give two reason to support me. First, when anyone want to go to the shopping we need the money to buy anything. Also, if anyone does not have money, we will feel sad and angry. And, this feeling may make anyone to do anything do get money even if illegal, and these make a big problem for all.This is a very good introduction, all three parts are covered
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In this day in age (or “These days”) , some of people think money is very important so, people study and work only to get money. As I see, the life with a little money is better than more money. Also, I have many reasons about my opinion but, I will give two reasons. Firstly there are some kings who have a lot of money but, kings can not buy their healthy. Secondly, there are many of poor family feel reset and freedom with out money.
This is a good introduction, all three parts are covered
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Life and money
can’tcannot buy happiness. I agree with these people, because the money is not every thing. Money a way of life and not an end of life, we need money to live and do not live for money. In this essay I will explain two reasons to support my opinion. First, the money not buy every thing around you. secondly,Ffriends and family are making happiness without money.This is an excellent introduction, all three parts are covered
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There are a lot of beautiful things in life are not sold like love and motherhood and attention.To be happy does not mean that should you have money. There are many poor people, but they happy more than rich people. It is argued by some people that the best thing in life are free and that, money cannot buy happiness. I agree withe this opinion and I have two reasons to support my opinion. In this essay I will write and discuss the reasons which made me agree with
ethis opinion (here “idea” would be a better word) . First, money cannot buy happiness and the natural places is more comfortable than manmade places. Secondly, nothing is more important than health even if you have a lot of money.This is a good (but short) introduction, all three parts are covered
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Happiness vary depending on the individual’s personality. Some people think that the money
con notcannot buy happiness. I agree with this people. Money can buy a bed but can not buy the sleep also money can buy the clock, but can not buy the time. When I see happiness people I feel optimism. Happiness is greater than money.This is a very good introduction, all three parts are covered
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Nowadays, there are a lot of people think the best things in the life are free. I agree with this idea. In this essay I will provide two key reasons. That will be support my opinion. Firstly there are a lot of things can not be purchased such as parents love, talents and good health. Secondly, happiness, comfort and reassurance. That are important things in the life and it is gift from god. Furthermore, you do not need any money to get that.
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These days some people thinks the best things in the life are free, and that money can not buy happiness. I agree with that, because the money is not all my life. My parents are the best things in my life. Some people love the money and they think, they can be happy and do every thing they wont it to do buy money. But in my opinion they are wrong
iI can not buying the comfort or happiness with money. So it is not every thing.These days some people thinks the best things in the life are free, and that money can not buy happiness. I agree with that, because the money is not all my life. My parents are the best things in my life. Some people love the money and they think, they can be happy and do every thing they wont it to do buy money. But in my opinion they are wrong I can not buying the comfort or happiness with money. So it is not every thing.
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These days, there are some people think the best things in life are free because they think free things in life will make them happy. However, I disagree that the best things in life are free. There are many reasons to support my opinion, in this essay I will focus on the two key ones. The first reason is because for many people the bast thing in life is shopping and buy nice things that will costs money, and the second reason is most people
thelike traveling and staying in hotel and that costs money andareis not free.This is excellent overall in terms of length and content.
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Generally, in life the best things if you have loads of money, you can have anything you wanted for,you can even buy a fabulous shoes some say we or you can buy happiness well it does, but we do not forget being free there is lots of consequences,being free. we sometimes forget many things in life just maybe for fun, because we do not have the hardship and do not forget one thing money is the roots of evil in life. We can spent time being free in these world but what is the outcome for these are we doing good or bad for these.?! Somehow and I can agree for these being free or having tons of money you can do whatever you want it.Think about it everybody agree for that,but we should know how to balance out things in life though. Secondly, the same time I would disagree for being free jut because what we gonna happen if in these worlds if everybody is free think about it could be in chaos.
Free = Things that do not cost money
Freedom = Being able to do whatever you want
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In this life there is something special makes you feel like you possess the world, it is those things that we do not need money to get it these are that make you feel happy
b. Because of that, I disagree with people who think that money is the happiness they believe this because they do not have those things that are even more valuable than money and the money does not define the ethics of the person. There are two key reasons toexamplethat support my opinion the first one is, emotions and feelings we do not need to buy them and the second reason is, health, family and friends never replacing or sell the money.This is a very good introduction, all three parts are covered
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In this day (These days or, In this day in age) , some people think
you can bythe best things in life are free butantherother people they cost money. In this essay, I will write two reasons for me agree with the people think you can by the best things with out money. First, when we spend time with family wedon’tdo not to pay money. Second, the nature can see with out pay money.This is a good (but short) introduction, only two parts are covered
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Nowadays,people think the the best thing in our life are free. However I disagree with that. Iwill give two reasons in this essay. First reason money is imprtant (?) becouse (?) it’s give you opportnuity (?) to do a lot of things. Secondly it’s give you chance to help poor people from the money.
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These days, the world is evolution and all people we want something to live and improve their life.
There fourTherefore, I agree with the idea that some people that the best things in life are free and money can not buy happiness.There are many reasons for my opinion, however, in this essay I will give two reasons. The first reason is because money cannot buy health and wellnesscan not buy from moneyand secondly,there iswhen we sit with our family and talk to them, this is true happiness.This is a good introduction, but it is too short
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All of us would do anything just to be happy . However , it’s impossible to buy happiness by money . Many people agree that happiness can be bought by money , while I disagree with that because human is the one who can create the happiness not money . In addition , money won’t last forever .
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Some people feel that the secret of the happiness is money. Money brings for us the happiness in many things.However, there are things that money can not buy it. such as friends and family and love. I agree that money is not the secret of happiness because (very good) , the first reason, let us think about our self only and to be selfish. make your friends ignore you. (I am not too sure what these reasons mean?)
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Some people think that the best things in life are free and that money can not buy happiness. When people have money, they can doing any thing but, can not buy the good relationship with their families and friends. I agree with
thisthese people because they can not buy the happiness while using the money and many people have the money but, they are not happy. Secondly, they can use the money in travel and shopping but, can not use it in their relationship with their parents.This is a very good introduction, all three parts are covered
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These days, money can not buy happiness and the good life, but the friendly relations and love, that’s what a new study revealed what people actually appreciated. Therefore, I completely agree with the point of view of the good life is the key to happiness, not money. There are many reasons for my opinion, however, in this essay I will give two. The first reason is because true happiness breed of self and can not be provided by any object in the universe for us
It’sit leads to a nice in life, and secondly happiness her key conviction and conviction something very precious and missing these days.This is quite good, but a bit too short
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Nowadays , you can see differences type of people like rich people and poor people.However, some people think that the best things in life are free and that, money cannot buy happiness.I agree with this people. I have important reasons for my opinion is some body have a lot of money but they can not buy health. Other reason you can see happiness family they do not have a lot of money.
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In this day Some people think that best thing in life are free ,but anter people they cast
monymoney , I agree beacous If anyone live with her family me doesn’t need to many to mahe (?) happy only the family must fahappiness (?) ,Also anyone spend time with my friends he make up happiness and fun .This is quite good, but a bit too short
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The money not all thing in life there are important thing like happiness. Many people think the best things in life are free , I agree with this. In this essay I will explain two reasons . The first reason is because the money is hard to get it easily and second reason we can do everything without the difficulty.
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Everybody in this live, they think in different way, many of them think
sthat money is not all things in the live but other people they thinks in other way. I agree with the point of some people thinks thatbastbest things in the live are free. There are many reasons for my opinion in comparison, in this essay l will give you two reasons. The first reason is we can spend time with family and we do not have to pay money. Secondly the nature can be seen without paying money.This is a very good introduction, all three parts are covered
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In this life , there are some people think the best things in life are free because they think free things in life will make them happy. However, I disagree with thous people who think in this way . There are many reasons to support my opinion, in this essay I will focus on the two key ones. The first reason is because for many people the
bastbest thing in life is shopping and buy many things that will costs money, and the second reason is most people like traveling and staying in hotel and that costs money andareis not free.This is a good introduction, all three parts are covered
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Some people think the money is everything in the live to be happy . And I think the true happiness is Without a money and we should enjoy the time with family and friends .in this essay, I will give two reasons to support my opinion. First, some people feel happy around big families,friends and maintaining good health. second,the health is very important thing in this life and Without this health the life will not be good and the people are they sick they will feel unhappy throughout their lives.Even if they have money .
Some people think the money is everything in the live to be happy . And I think the true happiness is Without a money and we should enjoy the time with family and friends .in this essay, I will give two reasons. First, some people feel happy around families,friends and good health. second, the health is very important thing in this life and Without this health the life will not be good and the people are they sick they will feel unhappy throughout their lives.Even if they have money .
Depending to what people think and what I think ,The best things in life are free,because if we imagines that we are paying for every thing in our life spicily In our country,like paying for hospitals,schools,parks,beaches….act,that will be a trouble thing because there is some poor people they need to be happy and have a best things but they can’t pay for that,so what should they do.? Even if other people have money they will spend it for the most important things that they think it’s important,then They are not forced to wast them money for every thing,so we must have some thing in our life called FREE.
These days ,money is important in people’s lives . Some people think that the best things in life are free and money cannot buy happiness . Therefore , I strongly agree these people . There are two main reasons in my opinion . However in this essay I will give two reasons . The first reason money is very important in the life people can doing any thing they want for example shopping and travel and than people can feel happiness and secondly by money I can help poor people and make them happy , I will explain the reasons
These days, some people that the best things in life are free and the money cannot buy happiness. Actually, I agree with these people. There are many reasons for my opinion. The first reason, when I visit my friends and set with my family I don’t pay money so I feeling happy and I feel save behind my my family and my friend. The second reason, healthy body, I think that is the most important things in this life, because I feel happy and I can do anything when my body is healthy and do not have pain. So the happiness can got it free but should you think are the family and healthy make you happy or a lot of money and a lot of pain?!
In these days,difficult to get a life of well-being is an effort to get money. But the presence of friends,family and health priceless. So I agree on this thing,just sit down with the likes of happiness itself do not buy the highest bidder.The presence of friends and family around to check on you and talk with you and sit beside you and help you this also happiness,And also health does not exist for the life of others so do not buy a blessing and presence he wishes a lot of patients.
Some people think that the best things in life are free. In my opinion I disagree with them . I have two resinous, first some people like to spend their money for sopping and traveling. Secondly some people think that things are boring . In this essay i will explain this resinous .
In life they have special things you don’t need buy it. People believe that best things in life are free, however i agree with this people because money is not every thing in life. So i will discuss two reason for best things in life are free. first reason is set with your family so we don’t need money to be happy and have your family with you, second reason is when you sleep you don’t spend money you only go to the bed and sleep in every time you need .
Nowadays,some people think that the best things in life are free,and they do not have to buy for it. Actually,I agree with them for many reasons.Firstly,the natural is free,so we can have relax without money. Relaxing is one of the best things in life. Secondly, sleeping is free, we can sleep any time we want. Thirdly,the most important reason is that we do not have to buy for having a good health.
These day, some people think that the best things in life are free and that, money cannot buy happiness. Therefore, I disagree with this idea. There are many reasons for my opinion, however, in this essay I will give two. The first reason is because at the moment the money is important in life. The second reason is because now the money is what brings happiness to the people.
Writing about this topic is so important to write about. So, In this essay. I’m going to give a look at this subject, showing my analysis about why I agree the best things in life are free.There are many reasons the first reason is that money cannot buy happiness the natural places is more comfortable then man made place. Moreover, there are another reason that give us more explanation, nothing more important then health even if I have a lot of money. So, in the following lines I will explain that all.
The money can not buy the happiness, I agree that the best things in life are free, however most of people do not believe that. In this essay I will show you my reasons for why I agree that the best things in life are free. My first reason is that the free places is without constraint and you can do what ever you want. The second reason is that the best free thing in life is the health, you can not feel happy if you have disease.
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In this life, there are some people think the best things in life are free because they think free things in life will make them happy. However, I disagree with thous people who think in this way. There are many reasons to support my opinion, in this essay I will focus on the two key ones. The first reason is because for many people the bast best thing in life is shopping and buy many things that will costs money, and the second reason is most people like traveling and staying in hotel and that costs money and are is not free.
In this life we have many best things but some people think that the best things in life are free. Some people disagree with this opinion, also me. In this essay I will give you two reasons for why I disagree with this idea. The first reasons is because they likes to cost her money in the mall or shopping. The second reasons is because they spend money for buy many cars or things that it’s make them happy.
The happiness is the must important thing in the life that’s more important than money , everyone likes to live with it. In this essay I will give two reasons about the people who’s agree with the pest thing in the life is free, I agree with them because I think the best thing is sleeping and take a rest from work and stay at home because that’s good for body and health, however the best things is spend a time with family’s and friends that’s and stay together makes they life easy and comfortable, and that’s are what everybody wants.
These days, many people thinks the pest think in life are free and that, money cannot buy happiness. Hawever, I disagree with this idea. There are many reasons in my opinion. In this essay I will gives two. The first reason is, some people they like to cost her money in the mall or shopping also same place to feel comfortable they wil cost. In addition, the second reason is, they spend money for buy many cars or things that it’s makes them happy.
All of us want happiness in his life. It argued by some people that the best things in life are free and money cannot by happiness. Therefore, I disagree with this opinion. I will gave two reasons to support my opinion. The first reason is because when you have a money you can buys every things you need like , foods, medicines, entertainment, and necessity needs. The second reason is because if I don’t have I the money how can i spend my life . In addition the happiness does not lie existence except the existence of money.
Many people like to have free life and they have nothing to do, they think life without works will be happy and the money don’t buy happy life, in my opinion I agree people have free life because they spend time with family, also they have comfortable and interesting life, secondly working is for free life without work would be boring.
In life there are a lot of things that do not need to buy and also there are things that should buy to get them. These days, some people think that the best things in life are free. However, I agree with this opinion. There are many reasons for my opinion, however the first and important reason is sleep because it is important for health and do not need to buy it. Second, spend time set with family and friends.